thawing heart (final goodbyes)

10:53pm

(10/15/2019)

you ever heard of midnight hours

and soft words spoken ?

gotta place for me

somewhere in that heart of yours

underneath that pot of weed

but I am,

better off here I guess.

and I see,

whole time it really wasnt you

really really wasn't but I blame because i can

and you stayed while it lasted.

i felt something in the air

i felt something in ya smile

i felt something in the distance

I got a little bit more attached than usual

we getting a little bit more comfy tomorrow

you know what I dont know what you dont tell you keep it in spit them back out let me read dont

confine it your my secret you got secrets I dont know them but I'd love to

something bout you

and you think I'm probably crazy

but I think its mighty fine

I wanna lay outside

I wanna drive in the dark

not me but you

I wanna look out the window passing trees

and humans and lights and darkness

into darkness

with you

I said one time I wish the night would last forever for a few hours

but your face wasnt the face I saw

but I see comfort

all good things must come to an end

 

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