Tantalized Eyes

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90028
United States
34° 6' 4.3848" N, 118° 19' 32.6604" W

You take a look around seeing the jigsaw puzzle pieces of stones that make up the right wall of the house that you have spent half of your life in.
Each step you take leaves your individual mark in the new, yet already worn, comfy, beige carpet.
Your eyes flick to see the enticing treat of chocolate that is the newly received furnishings of a couch and matching armchairs.
You decide to try out this tantalizing treat in order to get a better view of the 50 inches of futuristic glory that is the new LED television.
However, even that gets overlooked as your attention is easily grasped by the door that frames the outside views like an ever-changing masterpiece.
The remarkable colors of summer bleed into your iris in the form of a descending star fused with the entire color wheel of the red hues.
A flamboyant Orange, turns to a luscious Yellow, mixing with a popping pink, all interlaced amongst a sky of powder blue.
The sights of the last five minutes have been so overwhelming that your mind has no other option then to fade the world to black and lock the image into your mind like the photo album that your mother hid in her drawers.

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