SURVIVING LIFE

"After surviving an estimated twenty four million one hundred and five thousands six hundred seconds which is roughly 279days inside the red obstacle filled river without opening my eyes, talking or even walking,I was just breathing and I'm not really sure of that, it was just by grace that i happened to escape through that little hole. How then do you think I can't survive living on dry land now that I'm able to do all I couldn't do when I was swimming in that shallow red liquid? Ask my mum"

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