the sunset

i sit out alone at night 

sunset so bright

falling asleep 

counting sheep

singing 

new hit on my phone

ring 

wish love was here 

when yet i still watch this sunset

i got up looked at the water 

went swimming 

but the sun came up so i just go home 

sleeping crying waiting till the next sunset. 

the clock ticks, the birds chirk, oh how i wish it was sunset again.

 

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