Suicidal

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A fallen petal

4 years ago

My roses are rotten

The violets have fallen

It’s pretty clear

My heart has been stolen

I’m ready to jump

Off of this ledge

Give me a pill

To take off the edge

You wanted me gone

You wanted me dead

Now there’s a bullet

Inside my head

weepingwillowtree

4 years ago

i felt this, it has a very nice flow, and some great imagery. 

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