Suffocating

Thu, 10/02/2014 - 13:45 -- bskye93

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I feel like I'm suffocating.

Maybe I should be suffocating.

I'm so sick and tired of this,

World that revolves around,

All these causes for commotion.

Can't we stop all of this commotion?

Let's get back to how it was,

Before all of this turned to dust.

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