Struggles

Sun, 11/20/2011 - 18:25 -- ppadmin

I want to cry but I can’t
Its so hard to explain the story of a girl
A girl full of struggles
And her heart is an arrow
An arrow of hate
An arrow of love
The hate in her heart is cutting through
As she cries to heal to wounds of all the hate and sorrow trust deep in her veins
She cries immortally
In a house full of pain

Comments

jwiener

Every single person is full of conflicting emotions, like you write in the lines "An arrow of hate / An arrow of love," and it's so nice that you can write about who you are and why you feel what you do, even when that feeling is pain.

Tanvy Sharma

love this so muchhhhh

how she cries to heal wounds that cut through caux of the pain

this speaks to me

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