Strong

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75165
United States
32° 22' 41.7972" N, 96° 46' 14.9304" W

Her face was pale

Barelybreathing,

Barely holding on

She lays on the bed sobbing

No one to go to,

No one to call home

Reaching for the light

It’s so bright like a lightbulb.

Wanting her to feel all right

I stand big and tall.

No more excuses.

No more cries

I just want her feel all right.

 

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