Stranded On a Deserted Island

Stranded with my thoughts 

alone with them 

alone with the waves

that rythmthic hit the shore line

alone with nature 

missing the world around me 

missing the woods in maine

missing the faces that I use to see

missing the voices 

the yelling 

the shouting 

the laughing

the crying 

I would need my bestfriend

but their also my lover 

We would share stories of the past 

Dream of being rescue 

Looking at the stars above us

We could be deserted together

without the nosie and trafic 

we grown accustomed to 

It'll be a home away from home

but we would be stranded 

stranded with our thoughts

we will be with the waves

we will be one with the nature

 

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