Suck it in suck it out.

What are you trying to do, pass out?

Not something you wish to be?

Take heavy thoughts in wisely.

It is hard to watch when it's hard to breath.

Will you stop going weak, don't deceive.

This kind of life is getting mild.

I never knew your mind was so wild.

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