A Star

Tue, 01/26/2016 - 22:09 -- j.s.m.w

She was once a star who shined upon the light, now she's just a girl who gazes upon the sight Killing her slowly Of course she seems sad Blowing smoke into magic Making all her friends seem gladBecause their sadness conquers her own Now who's here for the girl that is alone Downing on the concept of being riddenWhere's the beautiful sheen she once had Is it sucked into the abyss the creature hadThat crazy girl should be locked up The smoke she's blown is disappearing in a hot flash && now she can barely save her own ass I feel bad for the little girl that struggles Nobody there to hear her mumble" that sadness is here till we die "Crying to the sky that she's back for a long time I sat down with my phone and wrote this rhyme 

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