Special Deal

For every nickel I earn, I will spend it on you.

You’re always on my mind. It’s hard to forget

Your smell, your texture; you’re a beautiful view.

In your presence, I can no longer remember why I’m upset.

 

The accessories you come with are my type of taste.

You match well with a lot of things; I can never hate.

That’s why my love for you will never go to waste,

Because you are a special deal. You’re more than great.

 

Through difficult times, it will always be you,

To harden my heart, as tough as steel.

Because no other place will ever "come through."

When McDonalds is always offering you at the best deal.

 

20 pieces of Chicken McNuggets for 5 dollars?

How lucky I am to be offered such honor.

 

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