Sour Love

Red as a desert flower,

my love is being sour.

I tease the butterflies again.

They do not reach for any hand.

Instead of being stingy,

they decide to lean against me.

They will not stomp away,

and I will not go stray.

Still as a picture here

We hold each other dear.

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