To the Souls Who Search

Maybe she can teach me how to feel
Something I never thought was real.
Like it could be placed into a pill and
Swallowed like a bad deal,
For this one commodity politicians vote unanimously to kill
Any force that might force their hearts to submit to its will.
Love:
The reason for men and women to live in search of the right world;
Daughters, sisters, and mothers are the first to know this word
While sons, brothers, and fathers pretend
That this immutable voice was never heard.
In the end, it is not the measure of force that determines strength;
The trophy is awarded to the one who
Can endure for the longest length.

Comments

layla.khalid.3

OMG. Very True, especially the  " Daughters, sisters, and mothers are the first to know this word.  While sons, brothers, and fathers pretend". 

 

 

livieMarie

. . perfect .smh

Royal Blood

Your flow is beautiful :)

Delovely16

Absolutely lovely!

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