Sonnet: Mother as to house

Tue, 04/30/2013 - 20:03 -- DWheel

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34761
United States
28° 34' 58.998" N, 81° 31' 36.2208" W

Shall I compare thee to a two story house?
You are most helpful and very defensive:
With decorations on as a blouse;
And the way of your work is very persuasive;

Most times the demand of a discipline mind,
With others the ways to collaborate;
With times of ruckess dead in sight,
By the thought of others that don't appreciate.

Except storms can never fade you,
Neither rolls or eggs will make you scream;
Nor the animals and mold could come and chew,
Because you will stay upright like ice cream.

So as long the walls or doors went crack,
There will always be safe place just more than your back.

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