Sonnet 1

The boy who stole my heart is mine for zeal.
Those huge cartoon eyes always gaze at me
With disbelief that this is even real
A couch with me is where he wants to be.

Adorableness is easy to see.
The moony eyes are seen from mile aways.
*On Christmas day, children aren’t as happy
*As two of us are on uniform days.

But nothing manages to break our ways.
*We will always be by the other one’s side.
Though we are always in a hazy daze,
We know which rules that we need to abide

Is love the thing to hold on mostly dear?
If not, then I do not want to see clear.

Comments

leela

Oh.......... I'm also in love with somebody. Even I don't know anything about him but I fell in love! My first love.........

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