Soaring the sky

Location

37207
United States
36° 13' 49.944" N, 86° 46' 18.4872" W

I look up in the sky and the clouds reflect my heart why do i feel like this nobody seems to care, on the outside i look cool, hip, and athletic to most. people think i have it all... but all is nothing if you don't feel it.So appearances are nothing and try to look deeper into your neighbors pain and not so much on what he has or gained cause at night we all look at the same skies.

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Comments

Xman2013TandF

It how I really about people.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

you are definitely on to something with this poem
i agree with you that one most look deeper to understand a person
i would like for you yo expand your ideas and increas your vocabulary
let it flow naturally as you write

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