So Alone

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I can't wake up, I think I’m still dreaming Lost, alone, my mind still teeming Screaming Back to reality I'm stuck between yesterday and today When I cried and begged you to stay To say We are infinity
Why did you leave, did you think about me?  Without you I’m dark and empty Lonely  I'll never understand  Is something evil dividing our hearts?  Bleak as a winter night, too dark  Apart  Solitary wasteland

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Tfortune

Could you give me feedback on my poem?

zwalker5

Im accustomed to traditional poetry but I like yours execept its to the point! I prefer poems that make you think! but at the same time poetry that speaks directly to people simply is good too!Everyone has their own style! :) I Love poetry and people who embrace it! Very nice

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