The smell of nature

The smell of nature brings a sense of calmness and freedom.
It gives the familiar feeling of family.
The smell of nature reminds me of my first taste of love.
A love that reminds you to let go and be yourself.
The side of you that you let no one else see.
The smell of nature brings memories of the ones you lost and will never get back,
Get back from the field
The field of asphodel.

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

Nate’s_the_name25

So relatable! I think you should add more to the poem though, a little more work and it’ll be outstanding.

Lucifer666

Thank you
And I will add more to it

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