Sky Space

Location

92201
United States
33° 42' 50.6016" N, 116° 13' 7.1364" W

Skyspace - Jack Kohler

the room erupted to noise, clatter and voices heard,
from morning talks before, only moments to go,
all these thoughts, grappled inside of her head,
to announce his presence, and how he was felt.

take me back inside, i'm losing all of my mind,
finding my way through whats real, turn the wheel.

for someone, who's searching for worth, you've been this way since your birth,
you track me down, and follow old trails,
you know me well, no cause for detail,
i'm paging through my notes now, take me back inside,
oh it's you again, you're my long time friend.

take me back inside, i'm losing all of my mind,
finding my way through whats real, turn the wheel.

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jackkohler

This poem is about the confusion we experience when trying to navigate through a world full of people who don't know how to connect with one another.

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