six degrees of seperation

Location

10458
United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

imagine a child not being with his mother
or a sister not telling the boy she loves him and seeing him in a pool of blood that is her brother
a homeless man being laughed at because he is poor
yet, nobody knew that he was only twenty four
every 26 seconds, a child drops out of school and out of touch with reality
as he gets older, his mind is bombarded with stupidity call ignorant mentality
a beautiful young lady not feeling wanted by her love ones
she'll find love elsewhere not knowing that people will strip her life away and be lost ones
imagine not feeling appreciative in school
there are people that will teach, but won't educate the truth in which you will look like a fool
you have the talent to play a sport
if you dont make the right choice, you will fall short
stay in touch with things that is importantly greeeaaat like tony
or you will live your life lonely and telling lies that is all phony

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dolvas

I felt that. I respect the way you go deep in this one. It allows the reader to be able to identify with you and know whats really in your heart.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

sorry for late response

its from the heart in terms of what i say

lomeeboh

POWERFUL title

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thank you

the poem reflects the title

check out my other poems

thank you for support

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