she deserves a sun

pipe cleaners 

are easy to mold

so why can't i make a sun

for a friend

who let me go to her room

when mine was inhabited

by people who don't want 

to talk to me? 

sure, i could make a heart

or a star

or a flower

but the thing is...

she deserves a sun. 

 

i'll just give her mine. 

 

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