Sentimental Beginning

 
 
Picture a place overlooking the elaborate skies and vast land
When light transforms to dark, the moonlit skies become inspirational
The sun rises and portrays the vision of adoration through the clouds
This place may be a mountain, an extensive climb to the top, followed by a steep and breath-taking drop, consummate with foliage, tasteful and true
Descend down the mountain, new beginning flashes by,
The wind becomes lyrical, it’s message, so factual,
I wouldn’t be thinking about this special place if I didn’t know you, and then I think intensely…
 
My special place is where you are,
Beneath the trees, gazing up at the stars,
Beautiful frondescence, falling softly to Earth
Moonlit sky continues to glow, as we talk about life’s hurt,
Then once again, to my surprise, there’s that sparkle in your eyes,
That perfect smile and strong, tight grasp, promising me,
A sentimental beginning…that is sure to last
 
 
 
 
 
 

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