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Feeling that cool, soft breeze against my skin feels, feels amazing... The smell of salt water drifting in the wind, making you relax as each wind blows, drifting more salt smelling air your way.. Hearing the loud thunderous thunder, is frightening but rather comforting, with the cool breeze on your skin, and the salt driven air.. The sight of this very lightning is beautiful but deadly, so calming but yet so life threatening... At last the pitter patter of rain hitting the leaves, cars and houses as it falls from their luscious clouds above..

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