'Self Admissions' ... A Poem written by Big Virge 1/11/06

Location

United Kingdom

This Poem RELEASES.........................
Some TRUE Self ADMISSIONS... !!!

Sometimes I DON'T Listen To Those Who Have WISDOM... !?!
Sometimes YES I'm RUDE But What Can I Do... ?!?
CHANGE Who I AM To Simply PLEASE YOU... ?!?

SURELY YOU Have Things You Must ADMIT Too... !?!?!
But Let's NOT Confuse... We've ALL Got ISSUES... !!!

THIS Poetic Piece Is More About ME...
And The Things That I SEE That FUEL My Beliefs ... !!!

I Believe In Relating My Views On Our Nation...
WITHOUT Separating My Heart From CREATION... !!!

The Words I Now Use Are Simply MY TRUTH... !!!

They're NOT To INCITE You To Dish Out ABUSE... !!!!!

My Poetic Scripts Are Simply... " A GIFT "...
From WAY UP ABOVE So Come With MUCH LOVE... !!!

But SOMETIMES They Come Like BULLETS From GUNS... !!!

So... Here's An ADMISSION That Needs NO PETITION... !!!
Some Things That I Write Are REALLY... NOT NICE... !!!

But It's MY BELIEF Sometimes We MUST SEE...
The Things In Our Lives That Make Us ANGRY...
Before We Can Find A Place FILLED With PEACE... !!!

But We ALL MUST Admit This Will Be SOME JOURNEY... !!!!!!!
One That Will LOSE Some Whose Views AREN'T Worthy...
of Being A Part of... " Our Society "... !!!!!

ADMITTING THAT Feeling Is CLEARLY REVEALING...
A NEED For ACCEPTANCE DEEP INSIDE... " My Chi "... !!!

Because EDUCATION AVOIDS Separation...
But I DO Admit THIS Schooling Right Now Has MUCH That Is FOUL...
ALL These Internet HITS Teachers NEED To... DISMISS... !!!
Parents NEED MORE Time To Relate With Their Kids... !!!

SURELY That's Something WE ALL MUST ADMIT... ?!?

See SOME Self Admissions Will Make Some Start Thinking...
That SOME Things ADMITTED ARE BETTER Off... "hidden"... !!!
Well CLEARLY They're WILLING To Hide From What's In Them... !?!?!

Well That's A Position FAR FROM..... Self Admissions.... !!!!!

Now THIS Is A Subject DEFINING Complex...
Because It's BOUNDLESS Or Infinite YES Wth NO Simple End...

See Some of My Text ADMITTEDLY Sends...
Some Back To Their Beds With... QUITE A COMPLEX... !!!!!
Because Their Poor Heads... Can't Deal With GOOD SENSE...

Now WE ALL Keep Things Hidden Instead of Enlisting...
OUR WILL To Be FREE With The Things That WE FEEL... !!!!!

But STILL Have The Cheek To Say...

... "Hey, KEEP IT REAL !" ...

Well Check Out THIS DICTION... !!!
You BEST BE Admitting...
The Things In YOURSELF...
That DAMAGE Your Health... !!!

And KEEP You From GRIPPING...
MORE... " Knowledge of Self "...

MORE... " Wisdom with STEALTH "... !!!

MORE Feelings INSIDE You...
To... REACH OUT And HELP...

Instead of JUST Living Your Life For YOURSELF... !!!!!

Well It's MY Self Admission I DO These Things TOO... !!!!!
But Here Is MY VIEW Sometimes It Is Cool To DO This For YOU... !!!

Because EVERYBODY CAN'T Deal With THE TRUTH... !!!

Like Seeing RACISM That... ALL Of Us USE... !!!
My Own Self Admission Is... I DO IT TOO... !!!!!
But NEVER SUBMITTING To Walking THAT Route...
Is Where Self Admission Can Make It Seem Cool... ?!?

By This I'm ADMITTING A WEAKNESS of MINE... !!!
But Such Self Admissions TOO MANY Are MISSING
........... About THEIR OWN MINDS .............. !!!!!

We AREN'T ALWAYS Right...
We AREN'T ALWAYS Strong... !!!

Sometimes We NEED Time...
To SEE.............. What is WRONG................

It's REALLY NOT Weak To Admit That You Weep...
Or ADMIT Sometimes That You FEEL Incomplete...

I Guess Some Would Say That My Words Are REAL DEEP... !!!

When All They Are Doing Are Moving And Soothing...
As Well As.... IMPROVING My Mentality... !!!

So That My Poetry Can Hopefully REACH...
A Part of My Psyche That HELPS Me... BE FREE.....................
FREE With My BEING... Now THAT's DEEP To ME... !!!!!

Now I Have To ADMIT...
That THIS Poetic Script...
HASN'T Been Hard To Do...
Because It's Through LOVE...
That THESE Words Come To YOU... !!!
So I Hope Now You've Listened...
Or Just READ These Words...
You Will Now Have Learned...

How DEEP I Can Be...
Through Rhyme Driven Prose...

And A Few...

.... " Self Admissions "....

This poem is about: 
Me
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