to see (hater/hater/naysayer)

shades for the bright future…

black attire
to absorb the forecasted radiance
with just a little white
to reflect the dissonance,
(blinding) overcast that doesn’t last.

all the past experience
presents itself first- ‘tis the season
for a good outlook,
look out for the good
outweighing the bad, scales heavy
and off-balance. money struggling
to move after the holiday rush;
the blood in your head boiling
from the fallout as things cave in.

like fame,
..the stalactites above -
- the stalagmites below..
like flames

…prescribed, for a hazed today

- [nel.ito]


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