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I could feel everything I was missing

It was only a few seconds

that resembled an eternity

But nothing lasts forever.

I desire you for this present moment

Your smooth skin

The arch of your back

The strength you purpose

Pulling me closer

The intimacy you require, makes me vulnerable

It strips me of any pain I feel

But nothing lasts forever.

This moment isn’t eternal but it’s nice to fill an empty space,

if only for a moment.

Comments

TrueGeraldine

POWERFUL!!! You know what very little are capable of understanding. You understand the difference of momentarily and the eternal feeling of love. Job well done!!!

gallionac

Thank you so much !!!

powerful.imani

BREATH TAKING !!!! I WOULD LOVE TO READ MOREEEE

gallionac

Thank you !! & I started preparing something last night. :)

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