The Rose

Thu, 01/14/2021 - 21:35 -- Vanny

She was in the mirror preparing in a tight fitted red

dress, and he was preparing while thinking of his great love.

They were both getting ready for a date that would be surprising.

Now on their way there he decides to buy her a rose.

While she steps outside in a full faced makeup look with the hot

sun melting it down. However, you can still see her youth.

 

They have now met in an elegant restaurant, where they stand out for their youth.

He warmly complemented her appearance and made her cheeks go red.

With an order of an overly expensive salad and small steak, primarily hot,

they ate. As her hunger left something grew; her love.

While eating and chatting he pulled out this beautiful rose.

He later handed it to her and she was grateful for the gesture and surprised.

 

Later, after chatting some more they noticed these grand winds and clouds surprising

everyone in the place. Many felt worried, but they weren’t so affected because of their youth

minds.  The clouds grew dark, their hearts pounded harder, and on the table still sat the rose.

After a long convo and dinner he asked her hand to dance, and she did so in her flirtatious red

dress, and very tightly compressed he held her and he felt her heart full of love.

A crowd built around them in the dance floor causing the air to go from cool to hot.

 

When they went back to their seat the bits of sweat and redness showed how they were hot.

They sat for a bit and tried to cool of as well, then he admired her beauty and wasn’t surprised.

They both were too young to know much, but what was happening there was truly love.

Her beauty is what made him fall in love everytime and what made her fall in love was that lovely rose.

Both at a young age him being 21 and her being 18, both full of youth.

Since that day he had been convinced that there was nothing more beautiful than the color red.

The amount of fun they were having grew just as their cheeks grew red.

Although, outside was starting to fill up with dark clouds and big winds it still felt hot.

She was having a great time looking through his eyes full of youth, 

while he was so into her personality and sense of humor and found it surprising.

Her personality  combined with her appearance made her worth more than a single rose.

That nervous feeling he got from being near her shows his gut was full of love.

 

Never had he experienced this feeling of strong passionate love.

While chatting some more she pulls out a lipstick, and applies it giving herself some red

lips, which match the color of  her dress and that romantic rose.

As she did that he felt more heat and decided to remove his little jacket that was making him very hot.

After removing his jacket she was able to see his fit and lean body that she found surprising.

 From there they both noticed their similarities which was how they were full of youth.

 

As they did that a big tornado full of hot spins came on building closer to them and surprising 

them, while they held onto each other’s youthful hands and were determined by their love.

They flew into this big twister creating a red circle, while leaving behind the beautiful rose.

 

This poem is about: 
Our world

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