The Ritual

I see a girl

Thin waist

Pretty face

I wish I was her

I dont like this body God has given me

I wish to be pretty

So i found a ritual to make me like her

Perfect in every way

I completed the ritual

So why do I still feel ugly

The ritual was complete

Why isnt it working

I need to work on my self esteem

Now I feel pretty

Like a caterpillar 

Becoming a butterfly

I've evolved

I am pretty

This poem is about: 
Me
Our world

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