In Response to the Best Liam Neeson Movie Ever.

Sun, 11/18/2012 - 17:18 -- xoMPM

The edge of the ice.
The sun.
The warmth.
My Dad
and wife,
my men to carry me.

To live to the words
would be extraordinary.

Send the others away;
comes now the challenge
of the Alpha.

Drawn,
breathing.
Knowing fate,
choosing to fight,
and bleed.

Knife and glass.

On this day,
in the snow,
dies a man
of life.

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