remember when?

Mon, 03/18/2013 - 15:52 -- NVance

Location

44880
United States
41° 1' 43.4676" N, 82° 13' 32.628" W

do you remember?
when you would run to your dad
and he would hold you?

and he would make you
feel cared for and protected
when he would hold you?

do you remember when?
your dad would show your photo
and be proud of you?

and he would boast on
and tell his friends of success
and he was so proud?

i dont remember
when my father would hold me
and be proud of me

but i am still strong
other friends are here for me
to be proud of me

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