rejection

Tue, 05/28/2013 - 20:59 -- ashgolf

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26° 30' 41.238" N, 80° 6' 33.6852" W

Telling me you love me is not ok bud,
We are such good friends why try to risk that,
None the less, when youre with a brat.
Cant you see that this love will be a dud,
You walk through these halls thinking youre a stud,
Stop trying to impress me with your tat,
You're not cute, and even your humor is flat.
You might as well be a stick in the mud.
Calling me pretty, is that all you got?
There's more to me then what meets the eye
Ive got talent, heart, drive, and whatnot
If my answer isnt yet clear, I deny
I want to be friends but honey thats all,
You just stick to what you're good at; Football

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