As the Red Sun Dies

Fri, 09/13/2013 - 14:38 -- gyari11

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As the red sun dies

The ending of its life

The coming night begins in lies

 

Nobody can see the rise

Out of the evil strife

As the red sun dies

 

The women who lie about their size

The men who swear they're bigger than life

The coming night begins in lies

 

Unaware of their demise

Irresponsible for mere caprice

As the red sun dies

 

The priests who try to moralize

On deaf ears which do not prize

The coming night begins in lies

 

And there they lie in broken ties

Taken up by mortal strife

As the red sun dies

The coming night begins in lies

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