The real

I've always prayed to be a captain
Never thinking
That I'd be swimming in the ocean
The shore ain't clear
Sometimes I get tired of all the coasting
It's the waves
Through out the years
You sit and wonder are they ever gonna stop
I need a chance and I ain't looking for no yacht
I'm looking for my moms
And I'm looking for my pops
I'm searching for my friends
I love you all I'll see you at the end

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TalkinBoutTone

I was in my zone it took me about 7 minutes I'm hoping its liked

Much love to those that read and write

TalkinBoutTone

The best must be recognized don't Let me go unheard

Peace

hnmull

I love it.

TalkinBoutTone

Thanx for the support
Im new to this, this is my second poem that I've put up

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