Rated four

Jeremiah 13:23 

23 But there is little hope for you ever doing good,
you who are so accustomed to doing evil.
Can an Ethiopian change the color of his skin?
Can a leopard remove its spots?

 

Four.

 

Rated four ... need I more

or just appreciation?

On the bottom floor.... just an open door

to communicate my designation

 

Circles here... circles there

nothing but limitations

Reaching so far ... but not up to par

how to reach that destination?

 

My goals high.... expectations low

with the company's motivation

It wants more ... like before

how to understand their elevation?

 

Sincerity high ... like to try

misunderstanding's aggravation

Sincere but wrong ... an endless song

the end misspells conditions

 

Some progress made ... a clean slate

not really ... success on probation?

Limited by ... vision on trial

and human nature's acclamation

 

Changes without ... substantiating doubt

knowing inner man's proclamation

That it cannot change ... unless God proclaims

that change without limitations

 

Jan Wienen

 

This poem is about: 
Me

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