Rare Phenomenon

Sun, 04/10/2016 - 00:06 -- mhatch

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07950
United States
40° 50' 7.6452" N, 74° 29' 15.8316" W

My mind
filled with uncontrollable growth of doubt
was no match for you
Your touch
erased the traces of fear and defeat
that consumed me
Your kiss
helped me to obtain victory,
winning the battle of recognizing what is real and pretense
Your hug
sent a satisfying shock through my system reviving all that had died
Your actions
opened my eyes
and allowed me to see the beauty capable of living inside a human being
You words
removed the debris that had accumulated in the lines omy fragile heart
You alone
played your role in the repair of an injured soul

For this God, I need you!

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