Raining Thoughts

Thoughts drizzle from my brain 
Like rain grand-charging the sun
seeking to introduce his presence
Offering promises
And I, lingering in the moment
wondering, what he had to offer

Will he wash away my pain 
and bury my yesterdays in his out-pouring? 
Or storm my mangled emotions 
hurling out hurricanes
leaving me broken in his calm

Perhaps, he'll drizzle poetry
His breath warm and fragrant like the wind
whispering in my ear
caressing my mind with liquid fingers
Telling me to forget yesterday
See only today
And water it with change. 

Comments

Mafi Grey

Wow this is really a great piece. I love your poetry; everything has just a hint of spice. 

Cheryl Griffith

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