Rain

I saw rain clearly, he was tall, handsome and had beautiful blue eyes. He sprinted down the streets making everything flood. His moisturized, luscious hair flowed in the background. He vanished,  I saw him plummet from the sky onto the pavement.

"Splash"

Although he was transparent he made me smile as he gently rubbed my shoulder to my wrist.

I felt astounded.

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