Rain

Sky, why are thou angry so much?

Growling at my soul this much

I feel it's comfort as such

I put my hand to feel the touch

 

Pita pata rain drops to the ground

Don't care it is squared or round

A pleasant environment is what you found

A track of light I saw touching the ground

 

Come my dear to enjoy this

With a boat ride with me

Making sounds as pita pata hiss

Nobody enjoys as much as we

Comments

Kd_wholewhale

Nice describtion of rain !

Kd_wholewhale

Nice describtion of rain !

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