The Queen's First

Fri, 04/05/2013 - 19:16 -- RohnieW


United States
33° 56' 29.634" N, 117° 22' 24.2364" W

I've been calling you the Queen for some time
And this for a multitude of reasons
Out of wit, because your last name is King
About you can drive a man to treason

Speaking on the latter, there is more
In ten syllables it's hard to get out
But there is a ruthlessness in your lore
Which conflicts me so to the point of doubt

But I am intrigued, you are like a rose
Gorgeous to look at but biting to hold
I lacked words, so I put them in this prose
It took me a while to be this bold

In good humor, I think back to that night
And I ponder,"Could the Queen be my Psyche?"



This poem was great but out of the whole my favorite line would simply have to be "You are like a rose, gorgeous to look at but biting to hold." Simply magnificent!

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression. Always let poetry fill your life. Keep expressing your heart.  

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