Prove Yourself

Show me we never skipped a beat. Prove to me In the shadow of a dream, I can find a surreal reality; almost too good to believe. A wonderfully illuminated entity. Let me feel relieved When I look into your eyes And see A love lasting a lifetime, In gorgeous hues-Vibrant reds and stunning blues. I feel like I can fly- Forever on cloud nine. Lifted up by a love that is true. "Triumph is born out of struggle, Faith is the alchemist" And our strength is the catalyst.

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Keana1104

11 years ago

With this poem, even though the fact that it is actually about gay rights isn't obvious, I wanted to depict a real, true and beautiful love that lasts no matter what. And that fact that the lover's identities are ambiguous is important as well, because it should Knott matter what race or gender they are. Love has no real defined gender, color or even plan; it just happens

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