Promises and Lies

Do you see my problem?
My joy and excitement?
My pain, anxiety, and sorrow?
Oh, let me forget the pain.
Keep me happy.
Will you?
Can you?
Really?
Truly?
Sincerely?
I feel like I'm in between death and life,
Because I know there are promises and lies.

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