A Promise Built on Bones

Mon, 12/09/2024 - 22:13 -- Vivin

Will you stroke my hair?

 

Murmer tinted thoughts into my ears and drown my mind

 

The meanest girl

 

You promised me beauty,

 

but all there is, is everybody screaming,

 

but I know you chose me for a reason, im strong

 

You gave me a promise not many deserve, im special

 

Who better but me?  

 

We're a fated pair, you and I 

 

With ghastley unwecolme newcommers trying to strip us of our pattern 

 

They dont know you like I do, better yet, they dont know me like you do

 

They're fakes wishing and wasting away for a reality that wont be handed to them on that oh so familiar silver platter

 

You, hold me back 

 

Id rather just let our troubles lie

 

How long until I can let go  

 

Oh dear girl

 

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