Present Darkness

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60473
United States
41° 36' 4.4748" N, 87° 36' 13.7736" W

This present darkness is over whelming

Why can't my eyes open and let me see

This pressure on my heart won't set me free

But my soul can see the light, it's coming

Soon it is day and i can see shining

Millions of stars that are watching me

The dark that was here has to let me be

Now i can live and follow my calling

 

Out of all the trouble I've been through

I have to admit the outcome is best

All the pain, hurt, and misery I've seen

It has only made me a better me

So that now i can be a shining star

For who are lost in ths this present darkness

 

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