Poesia=Mi Libertad

La poesia es mi libertad
es como una escape de gas fugas
que se escapa mas, mucho mas

se derrite en mi alma como mantequilla caliente
porque para mi la POESIA no miente

da a presentar tus verdaderos sentimientos
para que vacies todos tus remordimientos,

y permitas recordar que tu alma esta vigilada
por un angel que te la tiene encomendada

por palabra del Senor y La Virgen
por eso mi corazon no permanece triste

porque se que alguien me cuida del mal
cuando el diablo y sus dirigentes me hechan sal

espero algun dia llegar a donde uno llega a desvancer
las heridas y memories que uno trata tanto de desaparecer

D.C. 7/27/12 7am

Comments

ambercurry37

I like that it's in Spanish, though I had to translate it and it doesn't sound quite the same when it is translated, but all the same, it was a beautiful poem.

Eunoia

Pablo neruda actually managed to make his poems sound pretty good in english though they best in spanish. However that's tricky and Mr. Neruda was a genius, however if you work towards it there are no limits. I, too, like that it is writeen in spanish

Eunoia

i like it

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