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Haiku: Dead leaves hit the ground. The words of wisdom, crush hope. Now, anger shrouds you.

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FindHer

12 years ago

"The words of wisdom, crush hope"
Is that supposed to mean, you can dream big, however those that came before you all failed when they tried? Regardless, that was a very nice haiku.

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