Sat, 08/24/2013 - 22:30 -- shgary


some people hurt. Some people die. But in the end we all survive the same life. Each

and everyone of us live to please. Please the world. Please socecity. Please each other.

But in the end the only part that matters is pleasing our selves. Some cant take the

pain or toughness of the world and decide that they couldnt even please themselves.

But one will learn in time only you can please yourself.


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