Pity Me.

Look Down On Me,

as i look up to my dreams

as i begin to start planning my schemes

though for you, not enough it seems.


Bring Me Down,

as i start stepping up

as i begin to wake up

but you still think itʼs just a set up.


You Think Iʼm Struggling,

but there just a lot iʼm juggling

excuse me if it seems troubling

but i can assure you iʼm functioning.


i have dreams, exempt from your expectation

may i remind you of all the frustration

complimented by all the complications

it is bold of you to make these accusations


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