Thu, 05/09/2013 - 15:45 -- hdoran


United States
29° 58' 47.0424" N, 90° 9' 48.7584" W

She saw the fall coming,

Their inexorable end,

Stupidly standing there

On the edge of the blade

Hanging over her head.


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