Overcoming Adversity

Fri, 12/27/2024 - 23:08 -- Jtay

You always see me smilingbut on the inside, I’m really cryingcar accident stripped away my movementat first there was no improvement As doubtful years passed byI no longer felt like I wanted to dielearning to overcome feelings of regretraging thoughts no longer a threat I began the process of healing my bodyeven though it was a little rockysaying “yes” many times in my headinspired me to move forward without dread Hearing a light whisper in my earI knew it was my time to perseveremustering up the courage to understandI’ve now found strength in God’s hands

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cecilymock

Your journey from despair to hope through faith echoes the transformative power found in Maya Angelou's "Still I Rise." The contrast between external appearance and internal struggle ("smiling/crying") creates a powerful opening that draws readers into your authentic experience, similar to Langston Hughes' exploration of resilience. Your progression from "doubtful years" to finding "strength in God's hands" shows masterful emotional development, reminiscent of Mary Oliver's spiritual revelations in nature. Keep sharing your story of healing and hope - your voice has the power to inspire others on their own journeys of recovery. If you need support, text HOME to 741741.

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